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Friday, January 31, 2014

Snow White (An Excerpt)

Hi, everyone. 
Welcome to this week's #SatSpanks.
Today's eight sentences come from the first story I ever got published,
in Best Bondage Erotica 2012. 
It's called, "Snow White"
(referring to the shade of her skin, not the fairy tale character.)
I hope you enjoy it!


“Tell me you’ve never gotten hot over the description of a public whipping.”
 I couldn’t do that.
 Not in good faith.
 The truth was, ever since I was a small child such things turned me on.
 “How would you like that, Lola?” he went on.  “How would you like to be tied to the post, the back of your blouse torn all the way open for the lash in front of everyone?  What would you think of that?  Having all those people witness your shame?  All those filthy, ignorant peasants applauding your whipping and jeering at you?”

Well, I hope you enjoyed the excerpt. 
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24 comments:

  1. Now he's probing into her mind. I like it when men are good at that.

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  2. I particularly liked this dialogue:


    “How would you like that, Lola?” he went on. “How would you like to be tied to the post, the back of your blouse torn all the way open for the lash in front of everyone? What would you think of that? Having all those people witness your shame? All those filthy, ignorant peasants applauding your whipping and jeering at you?”


    Public punishment (in fantasy) = SMOKIN' HOT!

    Thanks for sharing this one,

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  3. I'm betting that Lola's thighs were quivering with the anticipation of his words.
    What a smoking hot snippet indeed!
    WTG Angela!

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    1. I think she knows she won't be snow white much longer.

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  4. Ooh, public whippings make me quiver!

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  5. I'm trembling just contemplating his words.

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  6. Oh I believe he's hit upon just what she'd dreaming about. Such seductive questions he's asking. I'm sure she's going to melt.

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    1. Some men know just what to say, don't they?

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    2. Her bottom isn't likely to remain snow white for much longer, is it! Hot!

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  7. Interesting reactions. Loved the dialogue, but my reaction was totally different. He's explaining reality to her, which in my mind was miles different from any fantasy. So, my thought would be that his words gave her second thoughts. However, it could also be that his description turned her on. They acted like cold water on my face, but then, I'm not Lola. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. He meant to frighten her, but only succeeded in turning her on.

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  8. I think Lola might be open to the idea some how Angela. Hot snippet :)

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  9. Phew. I'm fanning myself off here. I couldn't tell you how many times I've read public flogginc scenes and ended up just as hot and bothered as Lola. And the taunting teasing tone he takes.......Yu-um.

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    1. Thanks, Tara. I haven't seen you on here in a while. It's great to have you back.

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