Hello, everyone.
Today we have an excerpt from my story,
"Tearjerker"
from Brattitudes.
I hope you like it!
Tonight I warm her up good, because her big sin was just being
kind of bitchy for a few days. I tell
her what she’s done wrong, and I tip her over my knees for the great unveiling. Once she’s bare she starts whimpering, and
that’s a sound I truly like to hear. It
means she’s very receptive to what I’m doing and we’re going to pull a
late-nighter.
Tonight she’ll get my hand, and tonight she’ll be very
remorseful and sweet.
“You’ve been a brat for several days now,” I tell her. “You know that, don’t you?”
“Yes, but—”
“Come over my lap.”
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Brattiness is a sure ticket to OTK.
ReplyDeleteIt sure is! Thanks for coming by, Leigh!
DeleteShort attention span erotica -- LOVE that. Thanks for sharing the snippet, too!
ReplyDeleteYou're very welcome, Sheri. I'm so glad you liked it.
DeleteJust his hand tonight, makes me wonder what other nights will bring.
ReplyDeleteI imagine worse brattiness = more severe implements.
DeleteTonight she’ll get my hand, and tonight she’ll be very remorseful and sweet. <-- Love that!
ReplyDeleteSounds like he's going to take his time, be very through and enjoy every moment of the late-nighter he has planned ;-)
Great snippet, Angela!
Thanks, LA!
DeleteLove the economy of prose here; very evocative with so few sentences. I'm impressed!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Trent. I'm really into minimalism.
DeleteI love the 'great unveiling' phrase. Very evocative, and I love the final line. A hot snippet
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ashe. I'm glad you liked it.
DeleteMmm, she'll be very remorseful and sweet-- I love that.
ReplyDeleteYep, those spankings sure can calm a girl down.
DeleteYes, I'm sure she is open to receiving this attitude adjustment, and he intends to make sure it's a lesson she doesn't forget for a long time to come. Great snippet, Angie.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kathryn.
DeleteYes, she'll be sweet. If only for tonight. I imagine the bitchiness will creep back in after a few days, setting up the cycle of punishment, repentance, and misbehavior.
ReplyDeleteYou're 100% right, Jolynn!
DeleteGreat snippet Angie. I loved it :)
ReplyDeleteWe all know what happens to brats - especially the more deserving ones! Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Abigail!
DeleteLove his inner thoughts before the spanking ;) Thanks for the snippet.
ReplyDeletegorgeous! love him!
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