This week is a continuation of last week's snippet,
and Eleanor is punished
for sticking her husband
with a pin in a bid for attention.
“Lie down. Face
down. Grab the bars of that bed and
don’t you dare let go of them. I’m going
to strap you hard, and if you’re real lucky, I won’t use my belt, too.”
I wriggled
into position, afraid to argue anymore, and I reached out and grabbed the bars
of the brass headboard.
The first
lash snapped against my naked skin and I shrieked. It didn’t hurt that bad, but it surprised me,
as the first stroke always does. He
brought the bridle down again and this time it did sting.
I hope you liked the snippet.
I sent this story to the publisher's
two days ago,
so let's see what happens.
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Just love the scene you painted, brass bed, the strap - I'd love to read more.
ReplyDeleteThanks, PK! I hope you get to read more, too.
DeleteLove this scene! Good Luck! Waiting sucks.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Rayanna! Yes, it does!
DeleteYou write it hot Angie. That is all.
ReplyDeleteYou're too sweet. Natasha!
DeletePerfect picture, I can see it all.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Stevie! I'm glad you liked it!
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