Hi, Everyone!
This week I have an excerpt of my story, "Time Travel,"
from the book I am currently working on called Brattitudes.
Please enjoy!
Time Travel
“Do you have
anything to say for yourself?”
“I’m sorry,
Daddy. I promise not to do it any more.”
He never says a
word in response, and he doesn’t move from where he’s standing. My heart pounds violently and I will him to
do something—anything—to break the tension.
Instead, he just
waits there until I sigh.
“I’m sorry,” he
says. “Am I boring you?”
and the other three stories in the book.
Please be a sweetheart and visit the other authors' blogs.
You can find them here.
You can find them here.
While you're at it,
why not check out my last book,
"So Spankable!"
which can be found here.
why not check out my last book,
"So Spankable!"
which can be found here.
Oops! That question never leads to good things happening. She's in trouble, and she sighed while he was weighing his options. Yup. Definitely not a smart move, but it makes for a great snippet. Thanks for sharing, Angie.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kathryn! I'm glad you liked it.
ReplyDelete'Am I boring you?' :) I'm guessing she won't be bored in another moment…Lovely Angie
ReplyDeleteDangerous words. I assume she'll learn not to yawn while being lectured.
ReplyDeleteAgh, I really wish it could be more than eight sentences. Lovely hook!
ReplyDeleteA sigh leads to the dreaded question. *hehe* And now she's about to be spanked. You've fired my imagination, a wonderful thing on a Saturday morning.
ReplyDeletePerfectly captured tension.
ReplyDelete"Am I boring you?" Hilarious! I can picture the whole scene and his expression.
ReplyDeleteLooks like the tension breaker and her waited response from him are moving this couple into some interesting areas now and her willingness to do something, anything is now having this reader wanting more.
ReplyDeleteOoooooooooooooh! That last line was perfect! Would love to hear her reaction to that line that is staying "and the spanks are just adding up"
ReplyDelete:D doooo something. I love his last sentence :) brattitudes definitely :D
ReplyDeleteUh oh-- should've kept that sigh in. Love the Daddy aspect...mmm mm .
ReplyDeleteYep, the sighing wasn’t smart. I loved his response though :)
ReplyDeleteSounds great. My GF is bi and goes to lesbian clubs, in fact tonight she is going, and dressing and acts like a little brat and women always come up to her and ask why she is throwing a tantrum and she tells them she needs to be spanked. So, she is taken to her car and spanked in the back seat, windows down. She records it for us to listen to.
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