Today I have a short story from my book, "Start Me Up: A Collection of Erotic Love Stories."
It's the same book that will be given away
It's the same book that will be given away
to one of my readers.
Just leave me a comment, and the one I like best will get the prize.
Well, here's my story, called "Shrimp."
Enjoy!
Shrimp
“No,”
I said. Never.”
She
was long and lean and tall, with those red, red lips I could never
achieve. First of all, I don’t know
how. Secondly, my lips are rather thin. Besides, it’s my eyes that are my best
feature, so I emphasize them.
“Want
to give it a whirl?”
I
glanced up at her, slightly surprised.
“Come
on,” she said. “The guys in here suck,
anyway.”
I
kicked it around for a moment, then I said, “Sure, but I won’t know what the
hell I’m doing.”
“No
problem. I’ll teach you. By the time it’s your turn to do me, you
won’t even care.”
So
she took me back to her place and ate my pussy better than any man has ever
done while she finger-fucked me and squeezed my tits. I lay there in bliss, wondering if her
lipstick was all over me. After she made
me come, I switched places with her and ate her, too, and she was right.
I
didn’t care.
I
didn’t feel the least bit self-conscious.
Her
cunt smelled clean and mossy and I eagerly mirrored her technique, or as much
of it as I could remember.
I
guess I did all right, because she took my phone and put her number in it,
telling me to call her next time I was in the mood for fish.
Her
words, not mine.
“Okay,”
I said, making her take my number, too.
“You call me next time you’re in the mood for shrimp.”
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Thanks for the excerpt and the chance to win!
ReplyDeleteSounds really good!!
natasha_donohoo_8 at hotmail dot com
I'll probably try to decide on Saturday. Good luck!
DeleteNice excerpt
ReplyDeletebn100candg at hotmail dot com
What a beautiful cover!
ReplyDeletedaringzoey@yahoo.com
You're too sweet! If you look closely, there's a black panther in the background, (since one of the stories is called "Jeff of the Jungle".) Good luck!
DeleteEnjoyed the excerpt. Thanks for the chance.
ReplyDeleteskpetal at hotmail dot com
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll probably try to decide on Saturday. Good luck!
DeleteInteresting excerpt, thanks for sharing it!
ReplyDeletetiger-chick-1(at)hotmail(dot)com
You're welcome, Emily. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteI can tell you're good at writing flash fiction. I'm sure there is more to shrimpy's story and I'm sure it gets hotter!
ReplyDeleteShilohSaddler(at)gmail(dot)com
What a sweet thing to say, Shiloh! Yes, I do write quite a lot of flash fiction. There's some free stuff around the web and a little bit on Yahoo. There's supposed to be an anthology put out by Leo DeGraunce (see links)but I don't know when. Thank you for being a reader.
DeleteThe excerpt sounds fun. Thanks so much for taking part in the hop.
ReplyDeletehumhumbum At yahoo DOT com
Thanks, H.B. I'm really glad I took part and met all you wonderful people!
DeleteThanks for sharing and for the giveaway!
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Thank you for taking part, meryvamp.
DeleteNice excerpt. Thanks for the giveaway.
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You're welcome, magic! I'm glad you stopped by.
DeleteSounds great! Loving all these excerpts! Such teasers! :) Very fun hop! Lots of great books! Thanks for sharing and for the awesome giveaway!
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. Being on the blog hop was fun for me, too.
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